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Joined: Apr 2008 Gender: Female  Posts: 83 Karma: 1 |  | plot? « Thread Started on Oct 15, 2008, 8:20pm » | |
A place anything can happen, a place where dreams really could come true. That was what they were aiming for when they made this place. The sparkling city lasted a little while, clean streets, decent people. Mysteriously, it all dwindled away, leaving half torn down buildings, a rat infested subway, and who knows what else...
It was a ghost town up until more people started moving there again. The people were the outcasts, people who just couldn't understand the rules of their society. The schitzos, the psychos, and those who were just plain different. Soon, everyone who wasn't what they were supposed to be came to this place. Vampires who wouldn't suck blood, malfuctioning robots, zombies who hated the taste of flesh, aliens, time travelers, psychics, witches, and a bunch more.
Soon there were rumors of what was drawing the outcasts together. Eventually it became known as the "Poison", for lack of a better name. It was even said that the Poison affected the state of the town, the weather, time and even people. It was clear someone who controlled the Poison could control everything and everyone.
People dreamt of what they could do if they controlled the Poison. A better life, no more wars, an end to world hunger. Then there were those whose thoughts weren't as pure. They only thought of themselves and how they could benefit from the Poison. Destruction, domination, and revenge on the groups who rejected them were all on their minds.
Those with negative thoughts came to be known as the "Toxic". The Toxic were determined to find the Poison and use it against others. Most though were not eager to join in any sort of organization, and perfered to seek the Poison alone with only their own benefit in mind. When news of the Toxic began to spread, other citizens were outraged. They wanted to live in peace without trouble from the outside world. Those against the toxic became known as the "Cure". They swore to stop the Toxic from getting a hold on the Poison so outcasts could live in peace together. Soon, they began to look for the Poison themselves so they could use it to make the world peaceful again.
What still remains a mystery is what the Poison actually is. At first it just was known as a mystic force, then thoughts of it being an object, like a crystal or something hidden in the town arose. The current rumor as to what the Poison is, is neither a force or object. Somehow a person could be involved. They became known as the "Bitten". The feelings and thoughts of the Bitten would change the way the Poison reacted. Perhaps the Bitten could pass the Poison onto someone else as well.
The groups continue to seek out the Poison and silently fight battles against one another attempting to thwart one another. Now, it's time for you to choose a side and pick your own poison.
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Joined: Oct 2008 Gender: Female  Posts: 42 Location: Outer Space Karma: 4 |  | Re: plot? « Reply #1 on Nov 25, 2008, 10:10am » | |
{{ I thought it would be better to post here for plot stuff... ^_^}}
It's a place where anything can happen, where dreams really could come true. That was what they were aiming for when they made this place. The sparkling city lasted a little while, clean streets, decent people. Mysteriously, it all dwindled away, leaving half torn down buildings, a rat infested subway, and who knows what else.
It was a ghost town up until more people started moving there again. The people were the outcasts of their societies, people who just couldn't understand the rules of their society. The schitzos, the psychos, and those who were just plain different. Soon, everyone who wasn't what they were supposed to be came to this place. Vampires who wouldn't suck blood, malfuctioning robots, zombies who hated the taste of flesh, aliens, time travelers, psychics, witches, and a bunch more.
Soon, people began to realize there was something strange drawing the outcasts together. That was when whispers of a magical entity called "Poison" began. "Poison" was some sort of object or person who had power over all things, they would say. No one knew for sure but soon, the Organization was formed. The Organization consisted of outcasts who were embittered by the societies that cast them out. They were determined to find "Poison" and use it against the "normals" in a war.
When news of The Organization began being told, other citizens were outraged. They wanted to live in peace in the place without trouble. A group began to form called The Protectors. They swore to stop the Organization from getting a hold on "Poison" so outcasts could live in peace together. Soon, they began to look for "Poison" themselves so they could use it to make the world peaceful again.
The groups recruit members and silently fight battles against one another attempting to thwart one another. Now, it's time for you to choose a side.
{{Dramatic ending!! lol. I switched around the wording a bit 'cause you had a lot of passive sentences... But you can do what you like with this... ^^; }}
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Joined: Apr 2008 Gender: Female  Posts: 83 Karma: 1 |  | Re: plot? « Reply #2 on Nov 25, 2008, 3:17pm » | |
sounds like pokemon. & LOL how'd i know we'd end up using the poison thing...? x 3 x
ummrmrmm...i don't see the characters being all that organized, considering they've been pushed out of their own societies & wouldn't be as eager to jump right into another. BUT IDK. i thought it'd be more of a every man for himself kinda deal, and some people team up cause they've got a common goal. LIKE BATMENZ.
okay rosie's rewrite of a rewrite A place anything can happen, a place where dreams really could come true. That was what they were aiming for when they made this place. The sparkling city lasted a little while, clean streets, decent people. Mysteriously, it all dwindled away, leaving half torn down buildings, a rat infested subway, and who knows what else...
It was a ghost town up until more people started moving there again. The people were the outcasts, people who just couldn't understand the rules of their society. The schitzos, the psychos, and those who were just plain different. Soon, everyone who wasn't what they were supposed to be came to this place. Vampires who wouldn't suck blood, malfuctioning robots, zombies who hated the taste of flesh, aliens, time travelers, psychics, witches, and a bunch more.
Soon there were rumors of what was drawing the outcasts together. Eventually it became known as the "Poison", for lack of a better name. It was even said that the Poison affected the state of the town. Weather, time and even people's emotions, actions and state of mind. It was clear someone who controlled the Poison could control everything and everyone.
People dreamt of what they could do if they controlled the Poison. A better life, more money, no more wars, an end to world hunger. Then there were those whose thoughts weren't as pure. They only thought of themselves and how they could benefit from the Poison. Revenge on the groups who rejected them, destruction, and domination were all on their mind.
Those with negative thoughts came to be known as the "Toxic". The Toxic were determined to find the Poison and use it against others. Most though were not eager to join in any sort of organization, and perfered to seek the Poison alone with only their own benefit in mind. With the news of the Toxic began being told, other citizens were outraged. They wanted to live in peace without trouble. Those against the toxic became known as the "Cure". They swore to stop the Toxic from getting a hold on the Poison so outcasts could live in peace together. Soon, they began to look for the Poison themselves so they could use it to make the world peaceful again.
What still remains a mystery is what the Poison actually is. At first it just was known as a mystic force, then thoughts of it being an object, like a crystal or something hidden in the town arose. The current rumor as to what the Poison is, is neither a force or object. Somehow a person could be involved. The feelings and thoughts of this person, the "Bitten", would change the way the Poison reacted. The Bitten could also pass the Poison onto someone else, perhaps.
The groups continue to seek out the Poison and silently fight battles against one another attempting to thwart one another. Now, it's time for you to choose a side and pick your own poison.
DUN DUN DUN. christ on a cracker i make no sense at all lmao.
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Joined: Oct 2008 Gender: Female  Posts: 42 Location: Outer Space Karma: 4 |  | Re: plot? « Reply #3 on Nov 27, 2008, 2:04pm » | |
lol, at least we're getting somewhere! XD
I'll try rewriting it a bit so it flows better. :3
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Joined: Apr 2008 Gender: Female  Posts: 83 Karma: 1 |  | Re: plot? « Reply #4 on Nov 27, 2008, 7:04pm » | |
yaaaay progress x 3 x
edit: for the sake of the forums, i'm going to say go ahead and start rping again [those brave enough to try > w >]. they'll probably just be pre-plot events going on [i.e characters meeting, finding houses and exploring a bit, etc.]
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Joined: Oct 2008 Gender: Female  Posts: 42 Location: Outer Space Karma: 4 |  | Re: plot? « Reply #5 on Dec 11, 2008, 9:43am » | |
Rewrite of a rewrite of a rewrite!! >D (I just fixed the flow a tad bit)
A place anything can happen, a place where dreams really could come true. That was what they were aiming for when they made this place. The sparkling city lasted a little while, clean streets, decent people. Mysteriously, it all dwindled away, leaving half torn down buildings, a rat infested subway, and who knows what else...
It was a ghost town up until more people started moving there again. The people were the outcasts, people who just couldn't understand the rules of their society. The schitzos, the psychos, and those who were just plain different. Soon, everyone who wasn't what they were supposed to be came to this place. Vampires who wouldn't suck blood, malfuctioning robots, zombies who hated the taste of flesh, aliens, time travelers, psychics, witches, and a bunch more.
Soon there were rumors of what was drawing the outcasts together. Eventually it became known as the "Poison", for lack of a better name. It was even said that the Poison affected the state of the town, the weather, time and even people. It was clear someone who controlled the Poison could control everything and everyone.
People dreamt of what they could do if they controlled the Poison. A better life, no more wars, an end to world hunger. Then there were those whose thoughts weren't as pure. They only thought of themselves and how they could benefit from the Poison. Destruction, domination, and revenge on the groups who rejected them were all on their minds.
Those with negative thoughts came to be known as the "Toxic". The Toxic were determined to find the Poison and use it against others. Most though were not eager to join in any sort of organization, and perfered to seek the Poison alone with only their own benefit in mind. When news of the Toxic began to spread, other citizens were outraged. They wanted to live in peace without trouble from the outside world. Those against the toxic became known as the "Cure". They swore to stop the Toxic from getting a hold on the Poison so outcasts could live in peace together. Soon, they began to look for the Poison themselves so they could use it to make the world peaceful again.
What still remains a mystery is what the Poison actually is. At first it just was known as a mystic force, then thoughts of it being an object, like a crystal or something hidden in the town arose. The current rumor as to what the Poison is, is neither a force or object. Somehow a person could be involved. They became known as the "Bitten". The feelings and thoughts of the Bitten would change the way the Poison reacted. Perhaps the Bitten could pass the Poison onto someone else as well.
The groups continue to seek out the Poison and silently fight battles against one another attempting to thwart one another. Now, it's time for you to choose a side and pick your own poison.
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Joined: Apr 2008 Gender: Female  Posts: 28 Karma: 1 |  | Re: plot? « Reply #6 on Dec 11, 2008, 9:04pm » | |
I like it. =D It sounds fun.
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Joined: Apr 2008 Gender: Female  Posts: 83 Karma: 1 |  | Re: plot? « Reply #7 on Dec 12, 2008, 9:24pm » | |
i reckon that's purty durn gewd. -updates junk-
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Joined: Oct 2008 Gender: Female  Posts: 42 Location: Outer Space Karma: 4 |  | Re: plot? « Reply #8 on Dec 14, 2008, 7:14am » | |
YAY. 'Tis done!
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seems really good... so is this on the rp section already?
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Joined: Apr 2008 Gender: Female  Posts: 28 Karma: 1 |  | Re: plot? « Reply #10 on Jan 25, 2009, 6:03pm » | |
Jan 22, 2009, 12:50pm, Dark SK wrote:| seems really good... so is this on the rp section already? |
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Should be.
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